[原创]参加走进蕉村活动，赋诗一首。
<p><font size="6"> 蕉村游记<br/>山清水秀好地方，岭上网友聚家乡；<br/>顶古山下小村庄，官民和谐奔小康；<br/>惠泽水库人人赞，民心工程富八方；<br/>英雄故里美名扬，人杰地灵好风光；<br/>保路救国罗鲜清，伟大精神振中央；<br/>爱国先躯邹必诚，尽心竭力为人民；<br/>华夏朋友尽相问，片片热情在蕉村。<br/><br/>今天第一次参加走进镇乡活动，感觉很好，很不错，我也很喜欢。所以，回来连夜写了一首诗，一表心情。第一次写诗，写的不好，请广大网友指正。</font></p>[此贴子已经被作者于2009-12-14 9:24:13编辑过] 不错，看来社区人才济济哦。星哥，你要多提拔他哈。 第一次。。。。。。嘿嘿 人有点嫩，诗有点老，一个字：好 <p><font size="6"><strong>我的两个第一次（第一次写诗、第一次参加网络活动）都献给了金线岭。</strong></font></p> <font face="Verdana" color="#61b713"><b>老兵突击队员:`<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">作</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">业`</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">整</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">得<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">可</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">以<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">的<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">哒</font></strong>!<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">以</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">后<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">多<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">参</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">加<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">岭</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">上<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">活</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">动.<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">会</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">收<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">获</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">更<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">多</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">快<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">乐</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">的<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">哟</font></strong>...</font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></b></font> <div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>三江浪花</i>在2009-12-14 11:53:56的发言：</b><br/><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713"><b>老兵突击队员:`<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">作</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">业`</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">整</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">得<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">可</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">以<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">的<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">哒</font></strong>!<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">以</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">后<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">多<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">参</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">加<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">岭</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">上<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">活</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">动.<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">会</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">收<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">获</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">更<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">多</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">快<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">乐</font></strong><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">的<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">哟</font></strong>...</font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></font></strong></b></font> </div>
<p><font size="6"><strong>谢谢！以后的活动我肯定尽量参加！</strong></font></p> <p>不错！美丽的蕉村在你诗行里展现。支持一下！</p> <div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>香水百合</i>在2009-12-14 13:56:10的发言：</b><br/>
<p>不错！美丽的蕉村在你诗行里展现。支持一下！</p></div>
<p><strong><font size="6">处女之作，还有待提高！</font></strong></p> 硬是写得好，俺们只有拜读了。<br/> <div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>水蓝儿</i>在2009-12-14 16:09:43的发言：</b><br/>硬是写得好，俺们只有拜读了。<br/></div>
<p><strong><font size="6">拜读谈不上，相互学习！</font></strong></p> <font size="6">其实自己感觉写的不好，一直想改下，但是又知道从哪里下手？唉......</font> <p><font size="6">作为业余的，已经很不错了。我还是很看好蕉村的山山水水和风土人情，尤其是蕉村的人太纯朴了。</font></p> <div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>过往烟云</i>在2009-12-14 17:41:05的发言：</b><br/>
<p><font size="6">作为业余的，已经很不错了。我还是很看好蕉村的山山水水和风土人情，尤其是蕉村的人太纯朴了。</font></p></div>
<p><font size="6">确实，蕉村的人淳朴、善良。</font></p> <div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>桃花</i>在2009-12-14 21:26:17的发言：</b><br/>不错，看来社区人才济济哦。星哥，你要多提拔他哈。 </div>
<p><font size="6">人才说不上，爱好文学而已。</font></p> <div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>笑看凄凉</i>在2009-12-14 21:52:22的发言：</b><br/>第一次。。。。。。嘿嘿 </div>
<p><font size="6">呵呵 真的是第一次。<br/></font></p> <div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>梦浮萍</i>在2009-12-14 21:56:37的发言：</b><br/>人有点嫩，诗有点老，一个字：好 </div>
<p><font size="6">谢谢夸奖。</font></p>
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